A story of a mans love for his wife, and how it transforms as her body does.
Initially uploaded over on DeviantArt. First attempt to upload something here. Plan is to release chapters weekly. (Story is complete, just doing final edits one chapter at a time.) Feel free to leave me feedback here or over at DA.
DA - toobigistoosmall
NOTE: Some of the content filters will apply to later chapters.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.00
Muad
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
There's basically no BE in here to speak of, other than a few mentions of gaining weight and getting bigger implants. But because that's there, I didn't give it the lowest score. And it promises to be more. While I'm not a huge fan of weight gain, the story read nice enough for me to keep going and want to see the next chapter.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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