The gift of an ancient spellbook accidentally transforms Nina’s twin brother on their eighteenth birthday. She struggles with the magical side effects while searching for a way to undo the spell.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 5.00
penonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Glad to see you posting here after enjoying your stories on Literotica. You're writing is great but I find your stories just a little bit frustrating because they quickly blow past my own preferences. I would love to see a story from you that has about 6080 of the energy you usually bring, where the transformation unfolds slower and feels more lifealtering than worldhistoryaltering. But that's just me. Thank you for sharing.
wildcards
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Interesting read, I felt it kept the reader guessing what could happen next, which makes for an rather interesting writing style.
Galactose Tolerant
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love this one. I don't actually have a thing for incest, but Menoetes' writes the lust, physical and mental transformations so well that it still really works for me. It also definitely helps that it isn't all incest in this story, and it jumps right into the action just very hot transformations and sex. Highly recommend this and and anything else by Menoetes'.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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