Dr. Frankie Stein's gotten discouraged from her human experiments, and settles for growing pumpkins. As it turns out, her machine grows more than just pumpkins.
Meanwhile, when Jackie is dared to explore the "abandoned" house at the edge of town, she doesn't expect to find much more than cobwebs. In the end, she finds more—and gains larger assets—than she bargained for.
Will Jackie make it out before it's too late?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 3.33
RedGhost
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I quite enjoyed this start. Layout could be improved a little, but it was an entertaining read.
none
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
DirtyWolf11
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent entry, the sizes reached are a bit large for my tastes but I'm still excited by the prospect of a continuation!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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