Dive into a provocative tale of obsession and transformation. Meet Voxy, a dancer with a spark for the extreme, and her lover, consumed by a fetish for larger-than-life enhancements. Together, they chase the ultimate fantasy—pushing the boundaries of body and desire to create a living goddess. From seedy strip clubs to underground clinics, their journey is a whirlwind of passion, surgeries, and online adoration. Will Voxy become the icon they both crave, surpassing even the legendary Beshine? A story of surrender, excess, and the intoxicating allure of becoming more than human.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.33
- BE: 2.67
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 3.17
Naknak90
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Good AI stories are very much not quite there yet, but I can't deny how interesting it's been watching the quality creep up.
Codfish is right, there really is a lack of implant based stories. I always found that odd given how a lot of us, especially us of the ancient internet times, got into this scene. Makes me wonder how much point of reference AI has given the implant arms race was predominantly a 90s thing.
Worth a read, if not just out of curiosity at the idea of where things could lead in the future.
Implantator
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
When I sent in the story via eMail first I mentioned that it is AI aided story. I got directed back to publish it myself. While doing I forgot to mention AI in the short description which is also AI generated. You can see it with the 'Word count' at the end of the story which doesn't add up to my edits. Some months ago I ended on the Bearchive forum. I found an overly involved user into bimbofication with breast enhancement and objectification. Intrigued, the idea came up and I promted the AI to extract a certain users posts. The AI found the Beshine thread and a few others. Actually this is how the user sounded and even more! And it is correct, there is only few human changes and added sentences.
Codfish
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I agree. Screams ai. But with some nice direction and competent prompting. Sadly it lacks the depth of a proper story. I'm a big fan of expansion via implant stories and there's a lack of them out there. So anything that promotes this subgenre deserves some recognition in my opinion. Mix up the ai body of text with some human edits and perhaps run the whole story back through trying to expand on character and plot. Don't let the negative reviews make you stop making content. But I would credit ai as part of the process if you do use it.
OdysseusII
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Agree with anon that it screams AI, even the description posted has some of the tells of the way ChatGPT describes things. Overdescription, use of the em dash, etc
bobo
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
I love implant based stories but often they lack any character development, scene setting or any other features to draw my into the fantasy more. I love the idea, keep going with this theme and hopefully you can build on this base
anon
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
A by the numbers growth via implants story. Characters are paper thin and have no interests beyond plastic surgery. Has a very strong whiff of AI about it.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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