Ollie has some terrible luck with the next two challenges, that lead him to transforming even more than he ever wanted. Day 5 features more breast expansion. People in this community seem to like this story, so I decided to make this public upload feature images that are normally exclusive to patreon subscribers! I hope you all enjoy :)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.75
- Technical: 4.75
momo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
RedGhost
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
One flaw with your images. Your story says the main character has a basement bedroom but the images provided show a ground floor window with sun shining through and bushes outside in one of them. And the story at one point references black clothing but the images show green. Other than that, still an interesting story to read through at parts 4 and 5.
FairyLover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love this story! Its so creative and different form the usual.
BlackMyzery
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing story. I love the progression. Thanks for adding the photos, really added a nice touch to make the story more real. Keep up the great work!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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