Part 1-5
Dr. Elias Kane, a repressed biochemist, tests his transformative drug Erosyne on himself, becoming Elise, a hypersexual woman with exaggerated curves, only to be joined by his colleague Mara, who also takes the drug, leading to a chaotic spiral of lust and transformation in their lab. As Erosyne’s contagious effects spread, turning others including security guards and their boss Stahl into similarly altered forms, Elise battles her overwhelming desires and administers an antidote to halt the drug’s rampant spread, ultimately triggering the lab’s self-destruct to contain the crisis. Though partially reversed, Elise and Mara remain transformed, living together in a coastal town, forever marked by Erosyne’s lingering allure, while the world remains unaware of the near-catastrophe.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.67
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 2.67
- Technical: 2.00
anony
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
I would be shocked if this werent either fully written by an LLMAI or at least heavily edited from one. The repetitive structure, the odd phrasing and whole vibe feel very similar to what gets spit out perchance. That being said pretty good though grading on a curve.
Through Burning Eyes
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Worked fine for me. Very hot.
Dr Nick
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Story is unreadable. When the archive is opened, the type is overly compressed and the words are smashedtogether blurs. Use a standard font, proper spacing, and try opening the file and see if it's still word salad.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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