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The Overflowing Bra

commandlz
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Tiny, ultra-petite, illegally-busty Amber is frustrated by her disappointing relationship and can't help but wonder if there's something greater, better out there for her.
She stumbles upon the lone, polite-yet-reserved, gentle-giant Neil in his bakery. Curious, she finds him endlessly intriguing and does everything she can think of to open him up and unveil whatever it is he's hiding.
However, can she even handle what she's trying to unleash? Did she bite off more than she could chew...?
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