The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

commandlz
ydlz1986@gmail.com
Virum Pulchrum
Dr. Kirk Alston gets an emergency call to attend a special "Extremer" patient who was infected with the spreading "beauty" virus. He thought he knew what the word "Perfect" meant...
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 Naknak90
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
Gonna be real, I don't get the hate below. There's so much worse around here and I found it pretty enjoyable if a little silly. Dedicated Beautification stories are a rare thing.
 anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3 
narcissistic and way too long
 Julia
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 3 
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