The sequel to "Meeting Mary".
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.67
Commandlz
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Such an amazing story. Built so well, natural. Just great. It's so well how you built Mary's and Leon's relationship slowly. And such a great ending
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely hoping this is one of a long series! It would be nice if there were a lot more BE in the next one I could see it being foreshadowed, but I can understand wanting to build up the characters first... and that you did!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The long awaited sequel! Very hot addition. Gonna knock you for obviously not checking for grammar and simple spellcheck, which is out of the ordinary for you. I think you were eager to continue this series, so I'll forgive. Still, overall this series is great. Would love to seem some boob growth happen in future installments if you continue. You write people and conversations very naturally.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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