Kurt, professional underwear model, has never had trouble getting girls. But never before has he had an experience like he has with the enigmatic Crystal, a girl who invites him over for sex within minutes of meeting him. She gives him something he never knew he'd wanted, a bigger cock, before she kicks him to the curb. Though Crystal is determined for it to be a simple one time fling, Kurt can't help but want more.
Author's Note: This is my entry to the current contest ongoing at Swelltales.com focused on Cock Growth.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 5.00
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
wildcards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this story much more then I initially expected, based on the tags, brief story description and most of all how the story started out. Even when the sizes went overboard, the characters mood and mindset made sense and it made it an enjoyable read.
I struggled with the likability of both Kurt and Crystal especially the start of the story, the tone and dialog between the two felt a bit unnatural, too harsh or over the top for my likings. As the story progressed things started to click and I enjoyed it a lot more.
PatreonUser1
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Absolutely fantastic story, Crystal is a bit of a bitch but it made the whole story come together well.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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