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The Overflowing Bra

Fahzbehn
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Plus One
When Sam's friend Jon let him stay at his place until he got on his feet, he felt it would be smooth sailing. It was until Jon threatened to kick him out if he didn't do him a favor. Using magic, Jon turns Sam into a woman for the train ride across the country to be Jon's "plus one" at Jon's friend's wedding. What Jon doesn't tell Sam is that there's more to transformation than just his gender. The magic will turn Sam into a busty slut along the way. Luckily for Sam, as she copes with her feelings and experiences as a woman, she runs into a witch, Annie, who takes both a magical and romantic interest in Sam. This story was a commissioned piece.
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