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When Sam's friend Jon let him stay at his place until he got on his feet, he felt it would be smooth sailing. It was until Jon threatened to kick him out if he didn't do him a favor. Using magic, Jon turns Sam into a woman for the train ride across the country to be Jon's "plus one" at Jon's friend's wedding. What Jon doesn't tell Sam is that there's more to transformation than just his gender. The magic will turn Sam into a busty slut along the way. Luckily for Sam, as she copes with her feelings and experiences as a woman, she runs into a witch, Annie, who takes both a magical and romantic interest in Sam. This story was a commissioned piece.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 5.00
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this story, especially the first half. I really liked that her growth was described there. The second half had some nice twists, but it would have been more enjoyable if the breast growth had been described there. We really only knew how big Sam's breasts were getting. We are told that Annie's breasts are growing, but we aren't told how big they are. At the end, we are told that Jenny's are huge, but we're not told how huge. Also, we're told that Sam's ass is growing, but there's no description for it. Other than that, I quite enjoyed this story.
Mentha
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Callcenter
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Liked the twists and turns to the story, with all parties being changed in one way, or another, in many ways.
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