Lyra, the most accomplished student of archaeology at the prestigious Cambridge university, heads out into the field to seek the secrets of her family’s curious heritage.
Jake tags along, hoping to score with the infamous ‘Ice Queen’ of Trinity College. At the very least, he’ll settle for some good views of her A-class bod.
What they discover changes both their lives forever, and Lyra learns that her family’s abstinent tendencies are hiding a most salacious secret.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Alyzero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really close to an ideal BE story on this site. Has both slow and quick growth, hourglass, gets the mental tf changes right, characters are pitch perfect.
The writing style changes both with the POV and the transformation, which is great.
26 pages, so enough pages to get into a good rhythm without overstaying its welcome. Awesome work overall.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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