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The Overflowing Bra

JohnManTD
The Spell Of Desire
What happens when a girl who has always wished for larger breasts finally gets her wish... the only problem is they don't seem to be stopping their growth.
Average Scores:
 Red
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
not worth reading
 OdysseusII
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
It was a fun read, though when I read huge for the descriptor, I was expecting a bit larger than F cups. DD is considered average
 Neurotypical
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Positive and uplifting! 

 StanOs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
a fun read
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