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The Overflowing Bra

LusciousFawkes
Dr. (Bim)Beau 2, Part 2
Dr. (Bim)Beau takes Marcus Finn's "enlightenment" to a hidden grotto, where lesson 3 gets wild! Sarah guides Marcus through a transformation hotter than the jungle itself, forging a connection that's pure fire. As Marcus blooms like a rocket, their scientific curiosity explodes into raw passion. In the steamy aftermath, a discovery is made, But just as things heat up, trouble arrives...
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2 
Half the story tags seem to be false. I could be wrong because the prose was exhausting to read.
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