The next chapter of Zach's tale. After the conflict of the first chapter, Zach works to put his life back together, along with working on developing his new skills.
As always, please check out my Patreon for all my current and exclusive work. The third chapter of the Extension saga is available there.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
Torque
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Loved it, except for the twist of Rhiannon going viral with the technique. Kinda feels like it takes the spice out of their ability
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
