Craving color in her grey life, insecure artist Elara risks everything on a mysterious serum promising to unlock her true potential. She dreams of confidence, of impact, but the "Aetherium Serum" delivers something far more visceral: explosive breast expansion.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 3.50
Z
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
There's nothing wrong with in my opinion using AI to submit a story, but at least tag it in the description that it is AI generated. This is definitely a Perchance story based on the writing, the story progression, and the name Elara the AI generates that name randomly more than any other name. I also recommend you do some moderate editing. The way the AI writes doesn't do a great job of keeping the reader engaged despite it being descriptive. The liberal use of commas are like speed bumps for the reader instead of meaningful, brief pauses in a sentence.
Ultimately, not a bad story.
Rags
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very nice story! love the use of touch to describe the growth and keep the experience more grounded in the POV character. Very creative Ha method of tying growth the artitistic desires of the protagonist.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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