Dan finds a cube which allows him to swap body parts with anyone he sees! Sexy times ensues. Its a bit weird but aren't we all.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
xCuervos
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Its a good first story! I liked the characters and the illustration was welcome. I was expecting and hoping for more changes, with accompanying artwork if possible. Lets see what Dan does if heshe really explores the options on that cube.
gwltvww163
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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