Dan finds a cube which allows him to swap body parts with anyone he sees! Sexy times ensues. Its a bit weird but aren't we all.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.33
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 3.00
Sulis
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
AI generated text, it's very repetitive and adjective heavy, everything is with a newfound sense of confidence.
Essentially no characterisation for anyone the original girlfriend is simply forgotten the new girlfriend is a cliche we don't even discover the protagonist's gender until several pages in when a shop worker calls him sir, and he doesn't name himself until literally a third of the way in.
I believe the story came from a human mind but I don't believe that human mind read this AI interpretation of their story.
xCuervos
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Its a good first story! I liked the characters and the illustration was welcome. I was expecting and hoping for more changes, with accompanying artwork if possible. Lets see what Dan does if heshe really explores the options on that cube.
gwltvww163
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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