Wendy and Fred have difficulty conceiving, and paired fertility potions offer a solution. But Fred soon learns, Wendy wants to be a mommy in every sense. How much is he willing to give up?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
RENarin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Definitely hot and definitely not everyone's cup of tea. In terms of feedback I'd have like some more inner reasoning from the characters, they don't really work through their desires.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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