Wendy and Fred have difficulty conceiving, and paired fertility potions offer a solution. But Fred soon learns, Wendy wants to be a mommy in every sense. How much is he willing to give up?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 4.50
Bubs
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I'm mixed on this one. I really enjoyed the first part with the guy shrinking without losing dick size while his wife grows. The whole mommy aspect is weird for me. I'm not really a fan of infantilizing or unbirth. And then it got weird with some mystical stuff that didn't seem to go anywhere.
But yeah, first part was hot.
RENarin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Definitely hot and definitely not everyone's cup of tea. In terms of feedback I'd have like some more inner reasoning from the characters, they don't really work through their desires.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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