Any resemblance to real life people or situations is entirely intentional, Megan. You dumb, lusty, big tiddy bitch. Your brain don't work, you don't fit through doors. You're almost all boob and still screaming for more.
Love Zantar.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 3.00
CryptoExpander
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Surprised at a followup for this so long after the first two! This one was slightly hard to follow compared to Part 1 2 as it jumped around a bit but this likely was due to protag being mentally affected by Megan.
Overall enjoyed the story, and I liked the bit of the influence on outer world we saw. Wish there was a bit more of that, perhaps seeing more of what the corrupted scientists or Jess was up to?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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