Cynthia’s out of luck. Her last hope of making much needed cash at the casino was a bust. Out of the blue, a strange man approaches her and offers an opportunity she can’t pass. Cynthia decides to play along but finds she’s betting more than she can handle. Will her big gamble pay off? (This version of the story contains unsafe popping!)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.00
Luvtail
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Firstly, to FrigofFury, don't review a story you haven't even tried to read, it's very rude. Popping is an inflation term, though granted it's not generally referred to as unsafe. I assume the author meant gory, but there was no gore in the story. It was permanent popping, implying the character died, but it still wasn't gory. And they uploaded a popping and nonpopping version, so you can't complain that you were too scared to read it!
Anyway, good quick story, a fun inflation mechanic, and I enjoyed the build up to the popping. If you like popping and don't mind it being permanent, pretty enjoyable!
FrigOfFury
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I haven't read this story but I want to provide feedback on the story description. Specifically, I don't know what unsafe popping means and a brief google search didn't turn anything up, but it sounds alarming. That might be dissuading people from reading the story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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