Cynthia’s out of luck. Her last hope of making much needed cash at the casino was a bust. Out of the blue, a strange man approaches her and offers an opportunity she can’t pass. Cynthia decides to play along but finds she’s betting more than she can handle. Will her big gamble pay off? (This version of the story contains unsafe popping!)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.00
FrigOfFury
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I haven't read this story but I want to provide feedback on the story description. Specifically, I don't know what unsafe popping means and a brief google search didn't turn anything up, but it sounds alarming. That might be dissuading people from reading the story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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