Erynns roommate, Andromeda, has always had a knack for dabbling in the occult. Nothings ever come of it...until today.
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Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.33
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.67
someone
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
really nice story, keep on !
wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This was one heck of an enjoyable read. As the story progressed, I was more and more eager to continue reading, just to learn what is happening next. A Good first part, I'm keeping my fingers crossed it has a few more chapters yet to come.
Hope the next chapter will contain a bit more details and description of the changes that took place, found them to be a bit lacking.
Demon Slayer not
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story, picked the twist early on these wishers really need to work on their phrasing, the scene at the end was hot.
4s because much of the growth is while sleeping or just noticing it happened, and because I know almost nothing about the main character, which for a short story is fine.
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