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It’s recommended that you read the original story ‘Big Girl’s Problems’ by Wokod that was published in September 2020 before reading this work. This is the continuing story specifically following the wand that Polly had acquired from HellMart.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.83
- BE: 1.50
- Characters: 1.83
- Technical: 1.67
RedGhost
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Underaged. Please delete this it isn't a tribute to Wokod's work.
Noble Sword
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
BEEnjoyer
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Underage, which made me very uncomfortable. Please delete.
OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Gnarl
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Very little description of BE.
The shopkeeper really shouldn't have that much attention.
I see a lot of potential.
Ehh
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Story was okay.
The actual growth was more or less instant and largely described as changes to bra size.
Main character is also way too young which made me very uncomfortable.
A bit of a disservice towards the original.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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