Set in the Bigger Sister universe, this is the story of Olivia who had returned to the small town where she grew up in hopes of preventing her father from selling the family grocery to a major conglomerate. A chance encounter with Genie along the way results in a wish that changes more than just her own life.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
TheEarl
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought the writing on this was excellent a cut above a lot of amateur authors. I also enjoyed the wholesome vibes. Was a bit disappointed by there being an AIgenerated picture at the end, which took some of the shine off it, but overall, very good read.
The Earl
captsqui
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a fantastic follow up and I loved every minute of it! Only wish there would have been more followup transformations and realitychange impacts after the initial ones
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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