The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bubs
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This is the story of how I learned to comment on the erotica stories I read. 
Average Scores:

Trogdor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's a great bit! 
b
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Gottem
Nicoample
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is great! I just wish I'd have commented SLIGHTLY before reaches 18 inches of cock and J cups... 
TROGDOR297
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I don't think I'd ever curse anyone...but I certainly sympathize with the frustration of getting almost zero feedback from the faceless masses lmao 
monkaGiga
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Actually a pretty good story considering it's a bit.
RFK
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Frigging chainletter horror story of a BE fic, welldone.
Celine
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Didnt see it mentioned, so be sure to check out swelltales.com too! Its relatively new!
Dark
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Gods how I wish it worked  3
High
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Thumbs up
chargerse
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Enjoyable
Cantdrawatall
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Alright, you got me. Nice one
StanOs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very enjoyable and fun, wild transformation. 
Please no curse
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice one, not favorite but pretty cool
liked the horror
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