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The Overflowing Bra

CryptoExpander
An Expanding Fog
Jenna finds sleeping with her window open is less than ideal when a bust-growing chemical spill occurs. Can she get to her window before she's too big to move?

~2500 words.  My first released BE story, thanks to Ryver8 for the proofread!
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BunnysDead
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really cute short story and even within it's short form the character development was fantastic and completely relatable. Wonderful story  cannot wait for more coverage of the effects on other's exposed!
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