Betty, a tall slim housewife in her mid 20s, goes into the attic, and finds out what her scientist husband Henry has really been working on all these years. An experiment with *huge* results…
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.50
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 4.00
Dubs
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Its been a while since Trilon posted a work here. They used to be quite popular. But man does it feel like their writing has aged.
Overall this feels like it was meant to be a plug to promote their website, which is fine, but it really, really, feels like it.
Bubs
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
It's okay. At least there's description of the breast sizes. It needs to be longer. It would be better if the growth happened more slowly, and if there were description of how she reacted to each size she passed through.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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