Eugene's relationship just isn't working out for him. When he finds a genie with unlimited wishes he becomes greedy and wants to see his deepest fetishes manifest. What Eugene doesn't plan for, however, is being on the other side of his own sexual desires...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.75
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great. Loved all the descriptions of how the boobs were too heavy and she was too weak to handle them, along with the domsub relationship dynamic.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great. Loved all the descriptions of how the boobs were too heavy and she was too weak to handle them, along with the domsub relationship dynamic.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really great. Loved all the descriptions of how the boobs were too heavy and she was too weak to handle them, along with the domsub relationship dynamic.
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
This was worth reading just for the first half, which contains the transformation. I'm not really one for domsub stuff, so the second half didn't interest me, but I can see why others would like it. I am a big fan of ironic twists in wishes, and people's wicked desires turning back on them. The writing was technically good, but the prose could have flowed better. That will come with practice, but the author has some fun concepts.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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