The explosive conclusion to Roommate Screening. After one last Screening, Olivia the busty cocktease finally gets her cum-uppance.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 5.00
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
It was hot, but needed more size description. The story falls into the trap of a lot of expansion stories where the only description is along the lines of they were huge or they swelled even further. There was one spot in this chapter where they were described as basketball sized, which was nice. On the other hand, I understand that the focus of this story as with all of Fidget's writing is on the mental changes and the BE is only secondary. In that case, they succeeded.
Anonnymouse
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A decent finish. Not super great on its own, but if you read it right after the buildup from the other chapters it works much better.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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