Dr. Sarah Beau, a scientist grounded in pragmatism, journeys to a secluded island to debunk the myths surrounding the Bloomfruit, a legendary fruit said to possess transformative properties for women. Armed with scientific instruments and a healthy dose of skepticism, she encounters the Bloomfruit – a visually stunning fruit with an intoxicating scent and a palpable warmth. As she observes a local woman seemingly transformed by the fruit's influence, Sarah's initial skepticism begins to erode. A subtle stirring within her own body and mind, a nascent awareness of desire and possibility, suggests that the Bloomfruit's impact may extend far beyond the realm of folklore, and that Sarah herself may be on the cusp of an unexpected transformation.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.50
RFK
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Alyzero
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I had to use word wrap on the notepad file, just a heads up if the formatting starts off strange.
I liked this one, short and sweet with its own style. I felt it left me wanting more, though, like it left some BE specific description on the table. I didn't mind the writer's style but it probably won't be for everyone, it's pretty heavy on adjectives and fluffy turns of phrase. I'd call it purple prose except I felt it was on purpose. I also happen to personally like this island transformation subgenre, so I was willing to power through some of the more eyerolling phrasing.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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