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A boy, a girl and some magic sweets. A lot of magic sweets.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.50
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 2.50
Wren
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Dr. Enlarge didn't write this story. It was posted anonymously to alt.sex.breast in 1994 and nobody knows who really wrote it. I think it was mistakenly credited to Dr. Enlarge because he posted "The Mistake" around the same time this story was posted. I remember asking him if he wrote it, because this was the first B.E. story I ever read, and he said "I wish I had."
shelby
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
First of all you probably would have got a higher ranking from me if i could read it. Its not your writing style that detracts from the story its the format if it were say in a word doc or in an internet format (hint,hint) I would be very intrested in reading it
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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