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The third and final installment of divine intervention to Steven Smith and his descendants.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.67
BunnyMoon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed the story and love how open ended it is for future stories and offshoot possibilities. Thank you for writing and sharing with us!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Again, this is a great setting for a story. What if one of the Smith boys was orphaned as a baby and didn't know about his family blessing. You could really explore the scenario of him getting married and having a family, then somehow reconnecting with the clan and learning.
Strve
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great ending to a great story. Just a wonder where can we find more of your amazing work???
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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