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The second story of divine intervention to Steven Smith and his descendants.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Extraordinary
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Dear Noble Sword,
first let me thank you for still writing such amazing stories. I loved this one just as much as many of your previous ones. My favourite of yours is actually Extraordinary Reconstruction. I loved how much of a slut Adele was and how huge she wanted her tits in that story, being biggest in the office, alpha females absolutely turn me on. Close second fav is grandpa's joe snake oil. I love the growth of main character in this story and the premise itself. I only wish main character would be more of a cat. Flirting, showing off her curves and bathing in attention, fcourse when she grows.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Part 3, now! Again, very good writing. I like the premise a lot.
Steve
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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