Three skilled female adventurers go on a crucial quest to stop a sorcerer who is scaring a rural farming community. As they climb the mountain, a sudden blizzard hits, forcing them to find shelter in a nearby cave.
While exploring the cave, they come across a charming cottage in the middle of a large cavern. Inside, they find a lavish banquet waiting for them, with a table full of stews, fresh fruits, and artisanal bread. In the center of the table is an enchanted mug that always refills itself with warm, spiced cider, filling the air with a pleasant aroma.
The adventurers, intrigued and enticed by the magical beverage, partake in its warmth and flavor. With each sip, they experience a transformative sensation coursing through their bodies, indicating changes that extend beyond mere physical enjoyment. The atmosphere within the cave becomes vibrant with moans of pleasure as the three women become the new wives of the sorcerer.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.29
- BE: 2.57
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 2.57
Julia
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 5
Good for a few reads if nonconsensual is your thing. I skipped the first 12 pages. This would be better if the length was cut by half. The female character is rather shallow and susceptible to influence, which feeds into a fantasy of power that can be obtained by identifying with the male character that claims to be helping her. Reads like male chauvinism.
Look
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
I don't mind people using AI but there' such a thing as using it way,way too much.
The prose that come out is so purple it'd give HPL a stroke.
Don't think this is grammarly, this typical LLM stuff. I dunno what advice to give apart from get some taste.
anon
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
The author leans far too heavily on cliches and flowery adjectives. Take just the opening sentence
The forest was enveloped in an almost tangible silence, a profound tranquility broken only by the soft murmur of the breeze as it delicately weaved through the snowladen pine trees.
Apparently overuse of Grammarly as a writing tool makes text into syrupy AItinged slop. The characters don't have distinct voices, they repeat the plot out loud for each other every other paragraph, and the text never met an adverb it couldn't overuse.
builderjinn
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
More mind change pussy growth.
Paul Michaels
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I did write this from scratch, but I use Grammarly Premium to clean up my work. And if you still want to call my work AIgenerated drivel, then it is your loss.
kfc
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
if you don't want to actually write something why do you bother taking the time to upload it here?
OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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