The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

CursedApollo
Texas College Candy Man: Mary
This is the last story I believe I have written from this series before I went on a hiatus. I will have to find the rest somewhere else. Mary is growing very fast for her cam show and she uses the drug to do it easily for her viewers. 
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Ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Your descriptions had me walking in with a low bar. I enjoyed all 3 of your short stories. If I had to be critical, this was the weakest to me only because it felt much faster than your others but it's also the most BE and if your point was short and sweet it's fine. 
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