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The Overflowing Bra

CursedApollo
Texas College Candy Man: Fabi
This is the first story in a series I was writing years ago. If this gets some traction here I'll continue the series. 
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Ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Again, I walked in with a low bar. They aren't winning any awards but it's a fun short story series with an easy enough premise. Personally would love to see more of Fabi's growth.
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