Cassie is an anxious insecure girl, who is not enjoying her first vacation with her boyfriend Scott at a ski resort. That is until she discovers the Hot Cocoa Lounge, a place that provides advice, and offers free warm drinks...with a side of growth?
Authors Note: This is my entry to the current contest over at Swelltales.com. All my other recent work is available on my Patreon!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed reading this story, I found the detail of growth somewhat lacking, but overall still good read.
Amazing
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's stories like these I wish this site had a ranking, because holy crap this was fantastic. I really enjoyed the characters in this one, the boyfriend was hilarious with his convincing argument to Juliette at the end. Really just nails both the BE and also the overall flow of a good short story. Well done.
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