The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Fahzbehn
fahzbehn@yahoo.com
Just Add Milk
A short story about a trans woman and her girlfriend who undergo a drug trial and find themselves turning into busty, lactating women.
Average Scores:

EW and the dude glazing him are morons
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story!
m
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
transphobia sucks
CW
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A genuinely enjoyable little story. BE content in particular is always best when I care about the characters it's happening to.

Also, in NA at least, the same politicians that peddle transphobia also want to ban porn entirely. Consider if you hate seeing trans stories on this site more than you like this site existing in the first place. 
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
If you don't want to read a story about a man turning into a woman, then don't read it and don't rate it. It's not for you.

I thought this story was hot. I would have liked more detail on the breasts, or a longer narrative instead of a time skip, but I still got off.
fuck ew and his supporter
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Giving all 5s to once again balance the scale, tired of all these close minded shit heels appearing on this site as if trans content hasn't been on here for 25 years, seriously go fuck yourselves
EW supporter
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Giving all 1s to help balance out the mentha guy because EW is correct, trannies are gross and transpobia isn't a thing, the majority of people here dont want to be imagining an ugly hairy dude in a dress for this kind of content, could have been easily avoided
BunnysDead
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really enjoyed the story, please keep writing! As Mentha mentioned the breast growth needed to be there a bit more than what was actually delivered and the same for the descriptive nature of size  use everyday things that the reader can relate to, which you did pretty well with the as large as her head or larger than. Rather than beach balls use dinner plates, or as wide as a couch cushion, things like that.

I loved the readability of the story, the flow was very conversational in nature and I didn't have to struggle with phases.

Thank you for writing and submitting it here for us to read!
EW
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
trannies are gross
Mentha
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Giving all fives to help balance out that single blatant transphobic review there. You kmow. The one with the reference for a name. 

As for that one guy look, If it has the word trans in the description, and you don't like trans people, maybe don't click it, and let other people enjoy what they enjoy. I don't go giving bad reviews on multiboob stories just cause they have multiboob, you don't have to come here and signal your displeasure either.

As for an actual review, I would have liked even more emphasis on the breasts thats why I'm here looking for stories. 

Also, the use of cup size for size reference is actually not useful for communicating actual size, particularly since unless there was some kind of upheaval since i last paid attention most manufacturers start basically doing whatever they want after h cups or so. 
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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