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The Overflowing Bra

SabuADT
The Cafeteria Incident
Part of the Midas Labs universe, where a research facility endeavors to enhance and expand human sexuality. 

According to company lore, an untested sample from Dr. Carlyle's chemical lab was accidentally let loose in the cafeteria while many of Midas Labs's staff were present. The resulting "incident" has become matter of rumor, speculation, and secret glances in the hallway. No one who was there will speak about it openly, and there is no known security footage or other documentation we have been able to locate.

This is what happened.
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Charles
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I liked the story. Personally, I don't care about how the laws of physics work in these stories. That's why they are called fiction and not physics 101. 
Bubs
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I am not a fan of stories that use the science or chemical tag and then have breasts grow quickly without regard to the law of conservation of mass. The whole point of those tags is so that you can pretend the growth is plausible. If you're going to have the chemicals create matter from nowhere, then call them potions and use the magic tag. 

Other than that the growth is fine. People get huge breasts and balls practically instantly. 
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