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The Overflowing Bra

youhaveitinspades
Breast Reconstruction via Serum
A scientist develops a serum to help women regrow their breasts after mastectomy, however his first human test subject loves the effects a little too much, and they both push the limits on how the serum can change their bodies for the ultimate pleasure. 

Warning: things get weird and graphic!
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wildcards
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
The overall story was not all that bad, the some what odd writing style show AI isn't great at writing good smut stories yet.

I've skipped through varies parts as things fell apart in grammar or got to weird.

The initial story setup felt solid and had a good foundation to start from. I would like to believe that if this initial AI assistedwritten story draft, had been rewritten and correct, that it could have been a decent story. 
anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
The problem with AI isn't that it's AI per se, but that AI writing is bad. It's boring, repetitive, and unimaginative.
arcanebefan
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Reads like midquality generative AI output. Notable from the tendency to repeat specific phrases over and over because the genAI model is being asked to do something it hasn't got a lot of examples of.
youhaveitinspades
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Yes sorry it's AI, if that's not allowed on this site, happy to have it removed, no problem
Globly
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
It's an interesting premise, but it's held back by it's repetitive writing. Most sections spend half their time recapping the previous one. But then it also seems to forget what happened just a few paragraphs ago. Sizes keep hopping back and forth without explanation, things get explained and reexplained, conversations get caught in a loop. Even the page breaks seem a little off kilter, happening at strange points as the story continues.
It leads me to think that this is either a. Several drafts strung together, perhaps written or planned to be released episodically. Or b. This is lightly edited AI strung together from dozens of different outputsprompts. It has a lot the hallmarks of my own expiriments. If it is I wish you would put a disclaimer in the description.
If it isn't then I apologize. It's a good start. My advice would be to cut out redundant descriptions and sentences. Reread the story and ask yourself did I already explain this?
TROGDOR297
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Pretty good for a first post.  The direction you took it wasn't exactly my cup of tea, but that's neither here nor there.  I will say I found it a bit repetitive often there were multiple paragraphs essentially restating the same points previously explored, and for a lot of it the plot just seemed to circle around on itself i.e. she wants to be bigger, John says no, she wants to be bigger, John says no, etc.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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