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The Overflowing Bra

Trogdor297
The Essence of Life - Part 5
The final chapter in the tale of Gaiella, Elf Maiden, and Edward Brightblade, Human Ranger.
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 DrTopper
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
The Mom's growth did not disappoint! I really enjoyed this series, makes me wonder if this fantasy world could be expanded on as I ponder if other elves do the same thing, or perhaps they harness power different? In any case I look forward to whatever story you write up next!
 Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Love it!
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