The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Ethical Hypnotist
Graphic Design is my Passion!
Jesse Fisher's laptop is ruined! Lucky for him, there's an all-night computer repair shop that's always been there, ready to help Jesse unlock his passions and make the grade!

Can he get the girl, impress the administration, and graduate from the sexiest college on Earth with his body and mind intact?
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DocAutomata
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this story! I especially liked the PRS concept. I don't think I've ever seen that kind of thing implemented in that specific way before. While the BE process wasn't to my taste, the aftermath was very fun to read. The characters were great, and I loved how this overthetop porno world was depicted as such a positive environment.
SoylentOrange
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! The BE content is almost all poof style, sadly, so there are few descriptions of the process, but that's pretty common for reality shift type stories.
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