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The Overflowing Bra

Trogdor297
The Essence of Life - Part 1
The elf maidens of the Great Holy Forest tend to the needs of the land with their life magic...magic that also makes their bodies grow bountiful.  Gaiella is a young maiden who has not yet started her journey of growth, but after an unexpected encounter her destiny takes shape.
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BB47
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Trog is a good storyteller who focuses on the individual emotions of the characters.  In many ways, its like a romance novel format with a girl who cant seem to find the right guy, and a rough  handsome but humble stranger who needs her help.  Then, instead of setting it in an apple orchard like the Hallmark channel, its in an enchanted forest with sexpositive elves who are obsessed with growing gigantic breasts.  Troggy tends to write to the audience, so specifically for this site, all the good stuff is included.  Bravo!  Keep up the good work!
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loving this so far. Very much looking forward to future chapters!
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