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The Overflowing Bra

smallyogurtplz
A Typical Day on Public Transit
A typical day on public transit turns the lives of 6 young women all sorts of directions
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OdysseusII
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed this. Only complaint is that I'd love to have seen more of all of the women. Living with the consequences of it all was amazing
A Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A great reality shift type story. The girls are aware that something is off, but can't really place it. You also cover how they live with the changes, which I think is sorely missing from a lot of transformation stories. I also love shrinking  BE and so few stories do it. More please!
High heels big breasts
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I loved the tall tits on s stick stylish woman, hope there was more of her
goober
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
loved it, thanks for the upload
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The first half with the growth was really good. It was worth reading just for that. I found the second half, where they experience the consequences of the growth, boring. It would have been nice if the conductor got to join in the fun. 
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