Twin tales of cum and corruption intertwined. An empress seeks aid in fighting an invasion of slime girls, but does her advisor really want to help her, or just pump her full of his seed? Together, they look for answers in a first-hand account of the invasion's beginning, the journal of a goblin field guide whose revenge plot is sidetracked by her own growing body. What will they find? How big will they get? Stay tuned for part 2!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Jim
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great start. Looking forward to the empress becoming even bigger and immobilized
Alyzero
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really looking forward to where this story goes for Part 2 for the BE. So far it's a great set up while also including a decent amount in the diary, but I'd like to see more in that category for the present day scenario. Your descriptions are spot on so there's a lot of potential here.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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