It's summer, and Bridget is 18 and preparing to enter her senior year of high school, and she's bigger than ever. Her breasts are truly beginning to interfere with even the simplest everyday activities she used to take for granted.
Aidan has developed something of a talent for baseball, so Bridget's mother decides it would be nice to go out and support him at the first game of his final high school season, which unfortunately means Bridget will be on display for half the town. This leads to a few interesting interactions...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.67
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm of the age now where even reading about a woman who is 1820 feels awkward. I specifically didn't read the first couple chapters understanding this was a story addressing life as a young girl who hit puberty too fast, eventually morphing into our weird obsessive love of giant boobs. The title of the damn series is called Motionless, if that's not foreshadowing enough idk what could be. With all that stated, I think so far this is one of the most well written stories in some time on this site. The character work is very strong, and despite my avoidance of earlier chapters I still felt the weight of the end in this chapter and the very clear impact it will have on Bridget moving into the future.
I look forward to your future work.
I scored it lower than a 5 overall to reflect my own distaste for the age range, and the BE is off screen and again just of somebody too young for me now a days. I genuinely think the overall story and writing is top notch though, and hope my own bias on display can at least convince somebody else similar to me to give it a chance.
PredFan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
XXX
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
love it, cant wait for another chapter
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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