Acknowledgement:
First up, thank you for the feedback! I've seen your criticisms that the story is lacking in description of the actual BE, and that is by design. I understand if that's disappointing, but I didn't want to write about a young girl experiencing too much growth in the moment for...reasons. However, you should look forward to later chapters when she is of age. I'll show, in great detail, what it's like for her when she grows while still conscious.
Summary:
After her run-in with Eva and her toadies, Bridget has stormed out of the school. Her mother catches her outside and they go to have a conversation with the principal about bullying.
Skipping ahead two years, Bridget has found some success as a volleyball player. Her growth appears to have leveled off, leaving her chest much larger than average but still manageable. She has friends, and her relationships with Aidan and her family are close to perfect. However good she feels, though, the specter of her condition hangs over her head, and she dreads growing again.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.00
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
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