The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

TavernMoth
Motionless, Chapter 1
Bridget Thomas was an average tomboy before she hit puberty. Then things started growing, and fast. Then they kept growing as she got older. Then they grew some more.
Average Scores:

Bubs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Figures that three days after I post my story about a girl growing huge breasts and all the struggles she faces with them that someone else would post an even better story with the same premise. Bravo.
ABEEnjoyer
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I guess I understand why others are complaining about underage characters, but they're leaving out important context. The story is about a grown woman with giant, immobilizing breasts who has flashbacks about how she began growing. There's no sex in the flashbacks, it's just a realistic take on how she got so big and how it started. It's a comingofage story in a way, and a well written one, imo.
Red
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent for mood and realism, but really needs more breast description. That's lacking. Story would be a home run if it had good physical descriptions.
Queueue
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Modern classic. Not surprised to see haters for the reasons they've listed it would be boring to experience this kind of realtime breast growth, and yes the character is young, but it's excellent to see a very realistic take on enormous breasts when the fetish has been dominated by gravitydefying breasts so heavily. The only piece of real feedback I have is that the characters feel a little one dimensional, but I feel like the story accomplishes what it sets out to do. 
No to underage
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
It cuts out all the actual expansion for the most part
OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Features character under 18
XXX
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
love it, please go on 
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