Some more short stories I wrote on 4chan. A girl takes meds to grow taller, a girl grows immobilizing breasts, a mother's breasts lactate out of control, a girl gets spliced to become more foxlike, a pregnant futa needs to cum, and a witch upgrades her boyfriend.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.50
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 1.50
- Technical: 1.50
Geoffk
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
These aren't really stories. They're basically story outlines or ideas, that you could write into a story, but as it stands, they're not especially enjoyable to read and don't have the detail that even a very short real story would have. If these were rewritten into actual stories, then some of them might be interesting, bit in this form, I can't recommend them, except as a source of ideas.
OdysseusII
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Could have done without multiple stories about children
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