Maya Pine begins an intense sexual fling with the most unlikeliest of suitors...a tentacled alien from outer space.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Bunny Moon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wonderful story! I loved it even though it's not what I usually like to read about. I hope that someday we might learn of Stacy and Bill
Tunnelvision
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Interesting that you have a woman unafraid of being manipulated by an alien, who finds satisfaction and even encourages that manipulation. Couldn't finish the story yet, but will be back. Take it slowly, add other women or maybe even men who finds these aliens pleasurable, and you may have an epic on your hands. Suggestion maybe the women and men gain powers and abilities from the process.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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