The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bubs
Jessicas Day
A day in the life of Jessica, a young woman with absurdly large breasts. Describes her challenges and difficulties, and the adaptations she has to make. 
Average Scores:

gordon ramsay
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
Don't want to be too harsh since I like these types of stories in general the overall theme I mean, but I wasn't too fond of the writing. Likeable characters, but the vocabulary and style could use some polishing describing more in detail, avoid repeating words, etc.
RedGhost
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I quite enjoyed this. A simple, slower story that takes its time to set the world, show the characters and then move into scene.
SomeGuy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, very well written, very hot. Really enjoyed it
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very, very good  I loved the everyday life details. How she lives with her grotesquely overdeveloped mammaries. Any chance we can see Simon's name go in the book? Ballooning her to even more extreme size, to immobility, but in a way Jessica enjoys? Thanks for a great and very enjoyable story.
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
kino
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
Due to comment spam, any new posts with http in them will be destroyed.
Your Nickname:

Rate this story from 1-5 stars (5 stars is best) in the following categories:

Overall Enjoyment(How much did you like the story overall?)
1 2 3 4 5

BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
1 2 3 4 5

Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
1 2 3 4 5

Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
1 2 3 4 5

Your comments on the story: